Ideas and Content:In my Julius Caesar essay I demonstrate appropriate ideas and content. I provided appropriate ideas and content because most of the information I got for the essay was from the Julius Caesar book. In my Alchemist essay I demonstrated appropriate ideas and content also. I provided appropriate ideas and content by finding facts from the book and also finding more details from the book to support the fact.
Organization:My writing provides examples of good organizational skills. One of those example is putting an indent before I start off every paragraph. Also another example is using a hook in the first paragraph which will attract the reader to what they are reading. I can improve by having a clearer thesis statement, add more specific topic sentences and adding more detailed transitioning sentences.
Personal Growth:Between my Alchemist essay and the Julius Caesar there is improvement. The improvement between the Julius Caesar essay and the Alchemist essay are mainly the writing skills. The writing skills that have improved are my use of vocabulary, grammar and punctuation. Also I have improved a little bit on my organization skills. Like including a interesting hook to grab the reader's attention. I also had a clear thesis statement and had topic sentences for each paragraph.
SLR:An SLR that is used to construct my essay was Reason Critically. For the essay you needed to reason critically so that you could have an idea of how to construct the whole essay. Also you need to reason critically to know where specific things are needed. Also you need to reason critically to make the essay make sense and what order to put stuff in.
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